Temple Music, Responding to feedback

Ok so yesterday the feedback i got was the animation was too dark, there were a few strange shadows in there the logo was too close at the end, the camera movement needed to look more realistic, they didnt like it being on a wooden surface and to change it to marble and the notes should actually be blown off of the page!

I approached today feeling pretty confident and i believe i've made some good headway. it will take another day of work to get this next version right, but i sent the work so far off to the client to see if i'm heading in the right direction as there is no point spending another day on it if its not what they want!

ignore the strange lights by the way, i accidently left them in the scene from the last draft!